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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
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0 posted 2000-08-24 10:26 PM




Time has a funny way of sneaking up on you
Crippling you and stealing your sight
Dismantaling your meager existence
Shoving a mirror in your face
Then demanding a dollar tip...


          10 cents
    
How do you tell someone how you feel when they don't want to listen.....
At one split second
you no longer feel you know this person....
The one truth you felt in this dime-a-dozen world....
Slapped you in the face and gave you 10 cents....

    From(Brother Mike's archives)


Click


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1 posted 2000-08-25 11:35 AM


I loved this lines
How do you tell someone how you feel when they don't want to listen.....
At one split second
you no longer feel you know this person....

It is funny how time does that to us.  
Great work

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-08-25 12:17 PM


wow click, i could read your words all day.  truly. i can't even really respond to this one.  it speaks for itself.  excellent.  

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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