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The Cure For A Wounded Heart - A Quatrain
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The Cure For A Wounded Heart - A Quatrain |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Oh! Where lies the cure for this wounded heart? Bleeding since the day you decided to depart Foolishly in futile search of a herb have I spent the years! Full knowing that the cure lies within thy heart! Deepak Menon |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I really like the last line... well written  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deepak, I love these quatrains, just beautiful. And thanks for your observations on my last poem. Sandra |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Deepak....Excellent as usual. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Aahhh... Wonderful!!! I love your Quatrains! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Four lines of passion can say so much. Great poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
If there be nectar to be found in the insides of a poison ivy Then I, for all that's worth, am at will to kiss a stinging bee If this pilgrim in an ever search of love might find its roots Then I, for all that matters, would stretch to reach its fruits! .......... Hey deepak, I really enjoyed your quatrain a lot... wonderful.. regards, sudhir |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Nice quatrains. Excellent how poems such as these can be short and sweet. Well done! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A wonderful but bitter tale, Deepak. I can think of many more productive cures, though  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Thank You all - lovers to a man (or woman) I can tell! Like I said before - the quatrain is facinating in the fact that it forces one to confine the size of the poem to 4 lines only - and that too with limitations to the rhyming - and yet is long enough to allow one to effectively express an emotional statement! And smiles at Lotharingia - what do you think the expression "herb" stood for eh! Deepak |
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