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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
Last nite i walked with you along the shores of a private paradise and you held my hand we frolicked and danced and you bent down on one knee on the white sand and you gazed into my eyes and held out to me a beautiful diamond ring last nite i ran away from you down the shores of an enormous hell and you ran after me i screamed , you yelled and you begged me to stay i can't beleive i let you get down on that knee and you fell onto the sand and started to cry diamond tears from your eyes All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
beautiful and I hope all works out, there is a season and a time for everything. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Like a movie, but so much more painful because it is really happening to you. Nicely written and I too hope it all works out hon.  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi MiseryDivine, Powerfully emotional, you can fallow your every step, wonderful work here, hope for you the best. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! What a poem! Sharp and straight to the point... hope it all works out okay for you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful poem. Hope it works out. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beautiful poem, why did you run? |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
well...it wasn't exactly how i wrote it...im too young for marriage n all but i ran because i'm afraid is all. All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
MiseryDivine *hugshugshugs* have you been watching my life for the past 2 months?? i asked a girl to marry me. she ran away. she got scared. now she left me for another. i still cry those tears. hell i am crying now. great work huun. please e-mail me. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i really liked your poem. expresses a fear that i can connect to... well written, shira |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
very nice expression, i agree..."diamond tears from your eyes" I especially liked this line...clever use. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
awww...thank you all for your support! i wasn't expecting so many replies! you guys are so great! thanx again! <3<3<3 All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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