Belong, I.........A Cinquain Round

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Dark Poetry #2

Belong, I.........A Cinquain Round

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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0 posted 2000-08-26 11:18 AM

~I~

Belong
To the times past
Simpler yet elegant
Acknowledging with nod of head
Of Times

Of Times
When words rang true
Families connected
Traveling only in the minds
Distance

Distance
Walls made of glass
Others built of mortar
Breaking through takes so much effort
Lost Cause

Lost Cause
In a time warp
Wishing to travel back
Knowing only one direction
Open

Open
Body, mind, heart, soul,
To Waves of future cresting
Calmly washed ashore to nowhere
Belong

I

M
*2k

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-08-26 09:58 PM

That’s a poetic device I have not seen used for awhile. Good use of it.
Lost cause? My sanity qualifies!!

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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-08-27 04:35 AM

Maureen, so this is what a cinquain is supposed to look like. You write the epitomy of excellence.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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3 posted 2000-08-27 09:45 PM

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

love that....Deranger...thank you..I enjoy cinquains and even more so when combining them...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

LOTR
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 68
New Jersey

4 posted 2000-08-27 10:54 PM

I like this! I'll admit I've never seen this style before, but I'm just a unschooled writer so to speak. Very good message here too, thanks.
Richi

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

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