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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This will be the conclusion of my series (albeit small) called "The Perversion of Science". It is besed loosely on a major story idea I've had for a long time. Hope this brings a satisfying conclusion to the series. The rain falls, As the two enemies lay in each other's arms. Both are bleeding, But one is alive, and one is dead. All around is wreckage and destruction. Ruin and decay are the new order of things. "I wish we could have found a better way." The man left alive whispers into the ear of the defeated one. The threat has been defeated, But now everything is changed. Everything must be rebuilt, to fight the new enemy. Will it be a new threat from the east or from the west? No, it shall be the ultimate perversion of science. It shall be war, itself. The rain pours down. It is heaven's sorrow, finally uniting the two adversaries' blood, and washing it away. A world is destroyed, and another brought to ruin. Everything must be rebuilt, And men must find a better way. Nothing will ever be the same again. [This message has been edited by fractal007 (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Good poem?....story...point of view. very visual... Click |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
despite the fact that i was unable to read the other parts to this series..i can tell you that i liked this one very much..espcially... "The rain pours down. It is heaven's sorrow, finally uniting the two adversaries' blood, and washing it away." nicely done indeed..and has anyone ever told you u have a cool username..fractal... i think i like it a lot 'cause im a math major LOL. nice read once again  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- RLT |
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