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Don't let the door hit you on the way out...
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Don't let the door hit you on the way out... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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For some reason, felt inspired to write this about an ex. Goodbye, you say so easily How fast you're just a memory A moments love, a tryst in time And now you're on your path designed. A backwards glance is all I get I am that easy to forget? My love is sorely wasted now You never meant a single vow... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
How true!  Cat- I really enjoyed this one, you really out those feelings on paper for me! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Bam! This one just hits me. Cat,...this is strong. Yuck. But awesome writing. I'm loving these little bits of you coming by. Take all I can get. Heehe. Be well CatGurl. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh yes. This could be about several of my exes too! Very good! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, I join the queue to give you applause. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Cat I love the title...You expressed alot in a short time..I can feel the "end" as the door shuts. As always a great poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh yes Cat.... this says it all! Great poem as always DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
catalinamoon, this one speaks volumes of the angst and rage within you in a most subtle way... btw- loved the title... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon.... I'm finding your work to be inspirational!!! This one should go out to my ex..... Keep up the good work!! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! by ~ ~ Sun |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow moonbeam, this is really powerful. you vent so beautifully, when i read the title i was like oooooo she's pissed!!!! good one girl!! love ya. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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