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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Gold  Pink-white daisy on the lawn Before you know it you'll be torn From the warmth of Mother Earth To lie wilted in the dirt So enjoy and love life now Sparkle till the sun goes down And when you see another day Smile and watch your petals play [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How lovely, Uta. And don't worry I am not defeatist..I just have the occasional discouraging day This is a good reminder to love life. Cat... |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Rays of Hope and Good Cheer - So glad to read this poem. It is very good. Deepak |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
"And when you see another day Smile and watch your petals play" Terrific end! Good meaning to the whole poem actually. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is sweet and lovely....the colours do give it a cheerful touch. ~Dawn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Uta, love the colour's in this and as for the verse, you won gold of course. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I think I'll need to start wearing sunglasses when I read your poems Uta! Actually it is a lovely little poem which has brightened my day (and I NEEDED it believe me!)  |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
beautiful! A wonderful analogy on life and living moment to moment. |
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