Dark Poetry #2 |
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War |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
WAR A young soldier looks around at the dead of another race. While a young soldier looks around at the dead of another race. Their eyes meet and they wonder what has happened to this world. Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
I like this poem. i can picture in that moment of eeerie, awkward calm, the two soldiers from opposite sides look at each other, and realize that the whole thing is senseless killing all over again. Very powerful piece in my opinion. Well done! |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
I like this poem. i can picture in that moment of eerie, awkward calm, the two soldiers from opposite sides look at each other, and realize that the whole thing is senseless killing all over again. Very powerful piece in my opinion. Well done! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
It's true... war is a rediculous, terrible game that serves only sick and twisted people... About the e-mail, it may take some time ![]() |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a great one! I like the two soldiers each doing the same thing. It sort of conveys a sense of unity in a world broken apart. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
fractal007... that's what I was trying to do. Convey some sort of unity in an ununited world. "We, the willing, led by the unknowing, are doing the impossible for the ungrateful. We have done so much, for so long, with so little, we are now capable to do anything, using absolutely nothing" I made this poem from my quote. It just hit me. Thank you all for the kind responses!! ![]() "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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