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My Giving Of Love Lays In Waste
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My Giving Of Love Lays In Waste |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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My Giving Of Love Lays In Waste I have desperately attended every avenue available to me, but my mind is spent, for you have thwarted in jest my every move towards loving you. I have not of yet met the nourishing of my soul, so depleted I have become, a bitter taste you have left on the palate, one needing to be eradicated. Laying in waste my every word as you spew out darken decaying reply’s that fall to your feet reeking as that of dead fish, so much for any value you could give to this world. My thoughts are of pursuing far off lands in hopes of freeing my suffering soul of the chains you placed upon it so fervently. In short you have spent a lifetime of loving in a minute’s space, and blindly continue your revengeful assault upon my heart, thus leaving me no choice but to seek out life, love and refuge else were. I do so pity you for you have no idea in which way to walk life’s paths without thrashing the very essence of there purpose, this inherent unchanging nature that you have chosen will be you ending demise. My sharing of love with someone will be of the greatest of joys, and will no longer lay in waste in your behalf, this I promise you. By, Cerenity To all, This is just my way of venting, I am by no means a hateful person out for revenge I just get tierd of the hateful things said in life, I am truely sorry if this is too strong. "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i can tell you that this poem says exactly what ive been feeling for years. if youve been feeling this way then you have the right to vent...and i think you did it in a very tasteful way. fantastic job here! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Cerenity, I didn't find it to be too strong at all. I really liked it! I could share this with my ex, who I still love, though I doubt he's ever loved me. WONDERFULLY CAPTURED!! I have too many favorites to list, just know that I loved the whole thing!  I hope things get better for you! ((HUGS))"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
To both of you, Thank you for your kind words, life is too short to live it this way and if I could change what is happening I would, all I can do is wait, I get chewed on alot for waiting but I have to for awail I feel. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cerenity, I know that wasteland of an unloving man, and I feel for you. Keep venting, and do what I do, maybe.. Plan..plan..plot, dream, project visions onto yourself. It helps to get through it. Love, Catalinamoon |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Cat, Plan, plot, rearrange house, YELL, SCREAM, HIT something not alive of coarse, and I guess simple pray for better times ya, thanks. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is a great poem. I can comply with your feelngs. You are a great poet. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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