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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Butterfly in flight. powdery,paper thin,wings. One touch of fingers, ruins your gift of flight, forever. Killing germ, introduced. Arranged, and put on display. Beauty, preserved forever, never to be corrupted. Only you were cheated, of your life, when captured. Click |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Whoa Click,...this says so many things to me. Powerful. Indeed. Interesting and thought provoking and gosh,...it just makes you stand back and think! Great writing. Take care you. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Click, this really is a lovely poem! The greatest beauty is the most fragile. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Interesting concept. Very well put, good butterfly images. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
This was truly amazing. So much said in such few words. Sad and beautiful, great work Click. Loved it  ~Broken~ |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This is wonderful and delicate just like your subject - how did you DO that.... Amazing discipline and thoughtfulness here... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Click, though I know this has a much more extensive meaning, it brought to mind my trauma as a child when I was shown butterfly collections. I was always horrified at the callous pinning of the wings, the apparent indifference to the death. Awesome poem. Images so clear you could touch them catalinamoon |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Click, I have to agree with Catilinamoon. I could see those delicate wings pinned and how sad it made me feel. Well done. Juls |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Capture, instead of caption...I got Your poem and Your message...Really liked this, My friend! Greatjob! ~Sash~ |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
aaahhhhhh clickster, what a piece this one is. simply perfect poetry here. i can see that butterfly, suspended in death filled air. wow. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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