Dark Poetry #2 |
It is time to run away |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
run, run, run run to the hills hide, hide, hide hide and be still the reaper is furious in his seek with grim darkness, wishing to wreak hiding doesn't mean that you're meek rush into the caves, the body is weak hope, hope, hope hope to be alive hide, hide, hide hide to survive mighty death is in its wings bells of your end it rings your neck wanting to wring the noose is just a string run, run, run run away from here go, go, go go away from here |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes, Yes, Yes, a fun poem to read. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Reminds me of Jim Morrison's 'Not to touch the Earth' enjoyed this run and ride immeasureably.. well done *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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Janie Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 158 |
As I read this, am I correct in my feeling that this is about when the Anti-Christ is released and the children of Israel will have to hide? Janie |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very nice Sudhir - as usual your thoughts are original as is your style Deepak |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Victoria, Thanks for coming by... Isis, I just read the lyrics of the Jim Morrison song and found out immediately what I had missed listening to.. I have listened to many songs from THE DOORS but somehow missed out on this one... thanks for pointing me to it and yes there seems to be a distant similarity and thanks... glad that you enjoyed this one... Janie, I just checked upon that one with a few of my friends and they also seem to agree with you opinion in a way.. they said this sounds "black" a hint of "the beast" etc... but surprisingly I had not intended this to be that way... well, if that it is in one form of interpretation, so be it... I am glad to have a piece work open for different interpretations... thanks for reading and also for your interpretation... deepak, Thanks a great deal... glad you liked it... regards to all, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Running, running running Hiding now away don't want him to catch me Sorry I can't stay Great poem Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kethry, thanks for dropping by on the way (for a refreshing drink of sorts )... regards, sudhir |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your Welcome Sudhir!! 'Not To Touch The Earth' by the Doors is one of my favs of theirs. A faint similarity yes!! I can also see the beast theory in their too!! Namaste my friend, Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Isis, Namaste to you too, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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