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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Deep hurt... hidden fear. Deep wounds... anger withheld. Deep scars... guilt. Deep hate... sadness. Lost dreams, lost hope. No confidence lies here. Lost childhood, lost innocence. No beauty lies here. Lost friends, lost pride. No joy lies here. Lost days, lost years, no signs of a real future are here. Lost love, lost purity, no life lies here. Deep hurt, no hope. Deep wounds, no healing. Deep scars, no comfort. Deep hate, no mercy or forgiveness. "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this one hurts....every word is very much felt... honest and beautiful writing from an honest and beautiful poet (dont forget that!) ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... some fatal poem here, liked it a lot! I like those repeated phrases... Sorry, can't think of anything interesting to say... I'm kinda drunk now  and my connection is really miserable...So I'll come back tomorrow Take care! |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
LM... LMAO!!! You are so funny. DRUNK. I wish I was... but tomorrow is FRIDAY... and there's no school on SATURDAY LOL. Thanks, though!  "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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