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Solemn Nights And Darken Days
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Solemn Nights And Darken Days |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Solemn Nights And Darken Days Solemn nights and darken days to this I am promised. I am dying to be loved, held, cherished, knowing I shall not ever receive these feelings from you the one that promised so very much giving heartache and pain reality a never ending prospect. A look at your soul leaves my heart in an aching for something more, but you do not posses the ability to give more of yourself for it is just not in you and knowing this kills me inside. I did not ask of you much, just a sharing in life that should come natural to any human being. You have placed your orders for me to maintain a maid servant type of existence, rendering me to a lower station in this so called life of sharing and equality. I have done as you asked but a longing in my veins has pushed my desires past what you will ever except as doable, the heart can only absorb so much hatred and grief before it looses its elasticity and becomes brittle and shatters. I circumed more than ever expected of a soul mate to try and win your affection but to no avail. Now it is time for me to move on to a higher form of existence one that I should have been maintaining already without judgment, then there will be no more solemn nights and darkens days, at least in your behalf. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is so beautiful and so sad...an excellent portrayal of your emotions. I know how you feel on this...I just hope that you'll feel better soon.  Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
did not ask of you much, just a sharing in life that should come natural to any human being. You have placed your orders for me to maintain a maid servant type of existence, rendering me to a lower station in this so called life of sharing and equality. Wow Cerenity a dazzling poem so honest and yearning beautifully written. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cerenity, so sad a tale, and so well said. I wish you future happiness. We all deserve love, and understanding, and respect. Wonder why it is so hard to get?? Take care. Catalinamoon |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for your kind replys, As Catalinamoon said wondering why love and understanding and also fairness is so hard to get, but more yet if you let yourself get in to this kind of rout its very hard to get out of yes, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
A look at your soul leaves my heart in an aching for something more, but you do not posses the ability to give more of yourself for it is just not in you and knowing this kills me inside. Gosh, this is beautiful!!! every thing about this poem makes me want to cry.. this piece reminds me of pablo neruda's.. great work, Cerenity. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity my friend. . . Know too that just as it pains you to see me sad, it pains me to see you in such hurt. . . this poem is so full of that. . . We all deserve to be needed and loved and taken care of. . . Excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
well written verse here, Cerenity...tinged with sadness and heartache...you expressed it all so well Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Moshpit, Don't cry, I do enough for all, thanks for the kind words. Hi Sven, Oh my dear, you know very well empaths do not worry about thems selves, just the rest of the world, thank you I needed your loving thoughts today. Hi sonjes, Thank you so much, the heart is a good teller of all. Thank you all very much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Cerenity, this is a beautiful, heart-rendering plea. ~Hugs~...chanson~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Chanson, Thank you so much for your loving reply, and I also noticed that you are new here so I want to welcome you to passions I know that if you are looking for some of the most loving souls on earth you will find them here, I hope you stay, thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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