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Kindling Emotions |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Something is on fire, I can smell the smoke. The flames are burning higher, This isn't some sick joke. I've got this sinking feeling, it's at an all time low. I thought since I was going, I should let you know. Times have changed so much since the middle of last week. I'm so confused, I can't even act like me. I like to give credit whenever I can. So it's your fault that I'm like this, but it's my fault that I AM. I am alive, and I am breathing. I am alive, and I appear well. But on the inside, I am dying, and living in pure hell. Well, it won't be that much longer, soon I won't have to worry. Soon I'll be gone, away from the rush and hurry. I'll be in a place where nothing matters where troubles and fears, like a mirror, will shatter. It's your fault that I'm like this, it's my fault that I am. This won't have to be much longer, because I have developed a plan. Death. Death that will free me, it's the only way out. Death, precious death, it's becoming my best friend. But if that's the only way out, how did I get in? If only I could do it. Find the strength from deep inside. But if I can find the strength to end it, I should use it to live. Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow you have talent!!! i like this one alot. it was very creative. just keep your head up girl. eventually things will get better. ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
bloody hell...you've got dem skillz you do! hehe...i was all freakin till the end...dat was kewl! awesome poem! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
fantastic poem! you had me going until the end, i was happy to see that spark of hope! great job! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Lil One, I was preparing to yell at you for thinking death is the only way out and then... I'm glad you ended it on this optimistic note  Great one, as usual, Take care! |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Thanks to all of you. I hope you all have the same spark of hope that I have found. If you don't have it, I pray that you soon are able to aquire it. THANK YOU!!!  ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lil OnE, Awesome writing here, I too am glad life is more rewarding to you than death, a small tender spark can be the begining to a full and rewarding fire. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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