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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Close my eyes Take myself away To where I can be held In your arms Without guilt All night if I want... My reverie is broken By unwanted thoughts What is this sham? This lie I call friendship? It all hurts My soul sobs for your touch. Close my eyes Take me back Your eyes gaze upon me With so much emotion I am swept away That smile of yours Takes my breath. Touch me! Make my pulse race My body feel light Not my own... NO! Don't open Eyes! Stay shut Keep me locked away From the life I can't... ...Breathe... Close my eyes Please... Please... Love me. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is very sensual and yet sad, I to feel this way at times, if I could just lay in his arms things would be better, take all the craziness away. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
*sigh* if only they would when we love them so much, but sometimes we can't change them or the way the feel. Lovely, heartfelt work here hon  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely poem, very full of emotion. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
sonjes, I hear your indecision, your deep emotion...very touching words. ...chanson~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sonjes, very beautiful and heartfelt poem. I understand completely. Take care. catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i could feel the desperate longing in this..it took my breath away! wonderful job! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful, heartfelt poem... well written and stated. jwesley |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Your eyes gaze upon me With so much emotion I am swept away That smile of yours Takes my breath. Touch me! I know these feelings ..you expressed them well ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
This TRULY took my breath away. I read it in one long gasp of air... this was so beautiful, yet so full of emotion and what seems to be empty hope. Great work  "I've fallen asleep, slept so sound. Fallen so fast, I missed the ground" ~Lil OnE~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sonjes, sometimes. . . you just have to walk away. . . no matter what. . . excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sonjes, I feel your pain, your indecision, your numbness but yet I live this very thing every day and can not deside which way to go myself so I guess I will tell you I am with you in spirit and wish the best for you which ever way you choose. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
A very touching poem indeed... written very nicely |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I want to THANK YOU all for responding to my poem...it was what I needed to cheer me on a particularly uncheery day. I've been away from DP for a while, but when I feel better, I will be replying a lot more than I have...Till then... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
I absolutely love that! (and I hope this doesn't sound egotistical).. but it reminds me a lot of my own writing. beautiful, intense, you must have felt true love... I recognize the feelings you expressed. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
oh no Jsage...not egotistical at all...I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, thank you for replying. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just oozeing with actionmatic passion...James |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
James...I have never heard that use of words before..."actionmatic passion" very original...I appreciate the response to my poem. If you tell me actionamtic passion is I would appreciate it tenfold. [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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