Dark Poetry #2 |
Wanted |
Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
I wanted to be wanted.... The void in this life that has not been filled, Left it's longing that would not be stilled. I looked in many places, Never filled those spaces. Then..... I realized the truth one day, All I ever truly wanted is to be, Truly wanted, you see! And then I knew that could not be from outside in, But rather from my own LOVE, of ME from within! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
EXACTLY !!!!! You hit the nail spot on this time. This is what we all must do, take stock, reflect, fix the bad, celebrate, share and love. That is the secret to peace and contentment. Wonderful work!! *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
LOUD APPLAUSE oh you have said it so simply, yet SOOOOOOO well here...I admire your poem greatly! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How Sweet it is...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, so very true, and yet so hard. Truly love and want and accept yourself, that is a huge challenge. You have said this brilliantly. catalinamoon |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is a great shot in the target kid.No bullsxxx I had to realize this the hard way, but once I did all things came to me. A love found me (my white dove) just as I am. love,life. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great poem, loved it! Does it really work? |
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