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LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-23 04:13 PM

I linger for your touch
Persistant yet unsure
The way it made me feel
Neurotic yet secure.

I miss your brief caress
So gentle yet so bold
Just give me one more hug
Imposing yet adored.

I wish to see that look
So wanting yet afraid
Your eyes left me confused
Empowered yet restrained.

The way we've always been
So different yet the same
The way, I fear, we'll stay
Familiar yet foreign...

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-23 05:57 PM

there is too fine a line between sex and love...confuses many and causes many heartbreaks.

i really felt this poem pulling at the heartstrings...

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-23 09:06 PM

I think I need to borrow this to send to a certain man in my life.

What an incredible description of the confused feelings we have. Great writing.
Catalinamoon

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-24 02:20 AM

Sonjes: thanks for your kind words I'm glad I'm not alone so confused by love...

Cat: Thank you

I'd be honored if you borrowed my piece

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

4 posted 2000-08-24 03:03 PM

LM
as always... great piece

You have such talent... being able to express how you feel so freely... You are a big inspiration to me. Keep up the great work, hun

((HUGS))
btw... I loved the first stanza... neurotic, yet secure.

"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

5 posted 2000-08-24 03:28 PM

Wow... Lil, me? inspiration? I'm so new at this you wouldn't believe! But it made me blush , girl! If anything than you are the inspiration for me! I love your stuff!

Thanks!

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

6 posted 2000-08-24 03:43 PM

Yes, LM, you. I MEAN YOU!!! lol. I LOVE your work, hun!!! You are awesome. Thanks for your comment, though

I guess we can be an inspiration for eachother

((HUGS))

"I've fallen asleep, slept so sound.
Fallen so fast,
I missed the ground"
~Lil OnE~

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

7 posted 2000-08-27 02:54 PM

Very good flow of words!! AND meaning...I like this one...it is how we don't respond to others that tells them the most about us?? Good job!!

Thanks!

Click

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

8 posted 2000-08-27 03:26 PM

Oh yes, confusion runs rampant in the universe of love. Very powerful words here!

Curious, are you the same LM from Rapid-Fire's forum?

Gary

"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
-Edgar Allen Poe

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

9 posted 2000-08-27 03:39 PM

Thanks click and Jonas for your responses

Jonas: No

there's another LM here?
I'm posting my poetry only here at DP.

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