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What were you thinking?
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
What were you thinking? Did you think this time you'd break me? Did you think you'd make me beg? Was it just a game to make me hate myself for who I am? Did you want to make me jealous? Temporarily insane? Couldn't handle my rejections? Tried your luck just once again? Must admit, you really had me Going crazy for a while Feeling lonely, sad and ugly... You're just a spoiled little child! Did you think you'd devastate me? Make me get down on my knees? Said nobody's gonna love me Like the way you have, Please!!! No more silly degradation! I won't make myself a fool. Think you won? Congradulations! I've had enough of tricks you pull. Can't believe our 5 year friendship Would take on such a bitter course Instead of quiting on a hand shake For that I am filled with remorse. But not because this time it's over It should have ended months ago. Now my will has got more power To end this rhyme and let you go!  |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i definatly love this!!!i wish i could scream those words out loud to my 'best friend' who treats me like i'm her puppie dog...you gave me alot of insight into what i should do...thanks! great peice! blessed be Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LM very strong and angry poem it almost bristles. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Nik and Kethry  I am just sooooooo mad! I can't believe this guy! I took the blame on myself, I asked him to forgive me, said I was sorry, told him I miss him and nothing! He doesn't even say hello!!! So I think it's time to move on and forget everything... Thanks for the support once again! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I love to read poetry where the writer is truly venting! I believe that is when their best work comes through... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Sonjes You're probably right... |
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