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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Unheard voice... Unseen face... Unfelt touch... And you think you know me, Simply because you are reading. Barely deciphering what is before you, Never really seeing, touching, or hearing. *****kynder< !signature--> Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman [This message has been edited by kynder (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
unknown hopes unknown past unknown soul unknown |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow! Powerful! I love this one! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yay, Kynder's back. Every day I was looking for you! Great poem, strong thoughts in few words. Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Great expression...the unknown, very good!!! I enjoyed the read |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder...you have captured, distilled and displayed internet relationships succintly. I'm saving this one. Hardrock |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
See, 'sactly it. Most look at the cover thinking that it's the book. What many never realize are the amazing depths hidden twixt the lines of the pages inside. Well done short but tells the tale. Christopher |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Right on!!!~ *Kynder,...you hit this hard.* ~Exactly~ *Peace*. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
hey sis this ones not about me now is it cause i talk to you and care. Just playing. no really is it. LoL love this one as i do all your work and I'm gald that your back in here with me sis." cause i was getting scared with out you" Love JayBean or BroBean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this reminds me of my geography teacher who would always reprimind good-naturedly"We always look but do we see?" like the sentiments here...contains so much truth..we think we know somebody but do we really?  |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! Really liked this one!!! People tend to assume they know more than they do..... Thanx!!! Click |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great stuff... Couldn't agree more! |
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