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Without you tonight (song) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi yall. well on this lonely night i have wrote yet another song. and it is about guess who?? if you know any of my work it is about wanda. i wish there was a way i could get her to see my love. but insted she is marrying another. and not me. =( i hope yall like my song. i started to cry writing it and i am crying now. hell it is 5am and i havent slept in so long. all i dream of is her. how i wish i was in her arms. well here it is yall. tell me what you think. Without you tonight By: Jesse Charles Jaymz D A I wish that I could show you how much I love you E A I wish that I could hold you by my side D I want to look into your big blue eyes A But all I can do is sit here and cry E A I wish that I was with you tonight A E I know that theres been times that I have hurt you E A I know that theres been times I've made you cry D A If I had a way to turn back the hands of time E A Then I would have never siad goodbye D A I wish that I could show you how much I love you E A I wish that I could hold you by my side D I want to look into your big blue eyes A But all I can do is sit here and cry E A I wish that I was with you tonight A E I know that you have found somebody new E A And that I'm no longer the man of your dreams D A I should have givin in to my emotions E A "Cuz then the man in your heart would be me D A I wish that I could show you how much I love you E A I wish that I could hold you by my side D I want to look into your big blue eyes A But all I can do is sit here and cry E A I wish that I was with you tonight A E As I lay here I begin to wonder E A If your feeling the same way that I do D A I would give up everything in the world E A To hear you wisper in my ear, I love you D A I wish that I could show you how much I love you E A I wish that I could hold you by my side D Hunny Please give me a second chance A Lets give our love just one last dance E A And let me be with you tonight E A Oh let me be with you tonight... Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
DOH!!!!! the centering messed up the placment of the chords above the words. so all of you guitar players trying to play along let me know and i will tell you how to play it. the lyrics are the important part anyway =) Jesse C. Jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Jesse, This is so filled with emotion and love, What I would not do for this to come from the man in my life alas he has shone me he is not able to love anyone, I hope that your dream comes true, and also I want to welcome you to passions I very much enjoyed the song and look forword to more of your work. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Cerenity *hugs* thanks for the welcome. i have been here quite a while though =) i have so mush love to give. but alas everytime i give it they run =( when will i be loved?? who knows. thanks for the comment. hope that your not the only one that likes it =) i wish i could sing this to her. but my dreamz where shatterd when she said yes to him. my soul, dead, my dreamz, gone, my heart, never to be seen again. thanks hun for your comments. i wish i could write you something like this. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Jesse, a sad song, from a broken heart. I know, hon, it hurts. You have a gift though, for love, and writing, so you will be ok. Trust me.. Catalinamoon |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
cat. thanks hun *hugs* it just hurts. plus i found out todday that my other love, the one i wrote the forgivness poem for is dying of cancer. i am getting hit hard. but thanks to this forum i made alot of friends. and even a new sister. i would like to take this time to thank cat, dee, dkw, james, nikolette, and all my other friends i made here. my dark family. i love you all Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And we love you to jesse remember that! And as Cat and I have said previously, with a heart and soul such as yours, you won't be alone for long!! *hugs* *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks sis. i just wish others could see this in me. all they see is my hair and looks an run. hell i told one girl about how i write and she thought i was gay. all i want is to be loved, and held, and have someone to call mine. alas all of my loves are taken. thank you sis. i love you. *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Have faith Jess.. *hugs* Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Aww Jesse this is a sad but lovely song...Wish I could play music..would like to be able to hear the melody..and about all your loves have been taken..Not True..She is out there..your real love who will love you for you...keep smiling my friend*hugs* |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
kitkat. *hugs* thanks hun. but it looks like i will have to wait in love. unless someone wants me. all my loves are taken. wanda, found another, chandra, is a long ways away and sadly has cancer. there the only 2 that i love with my heart. yes i love alot of people but not like that. our sweet isis i love more then all. she is my soulmate. but not my lovers soul mate. and that my friend i doubt i will ever find. thanks for your reply love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Jesse, it's a wonderful song full of love and care... Soon you'll find someone better to sing it to, that's for sure  I wish I could hear the music (I don't really know chords and stuff...) Take care, ((hugs))! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jesse I'd agree with LM except I'd say it was a "wanda-full" song. Hope you find another. Be well (Hugs) Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Kethry a wanda-ful song. i loved that. i have only wrote 2 songs and both are for her. and sadly she will never be able to hear any of them. =( LM: thank you too. i wish i could sing it. for her, for anyone. i need love badly. =( thanks yall love yall jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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