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lost hamlet
New Member

since 2000-08-15

Posts 5

0 posted 2000-08-22 03:17 AM

A mystery dances upon
The subtle rays of the
Moon and blankets my mind
With a pure snowfall of
Her skins soft touch
Against mine,

The softest blond hair rests
Quietly upon her silk shoulders
As my hand of passion glides
Through her serene soul,

My head upon her chest
Can hear the beats of blood,
One after the other with no intent
But only to pump the fire throughout
Her existence,

By myself I survive of
her luscious scent
Filling my soul
With a desire to embrace
Until the demise of time,

I never wish to stir from this place,
Just watching her breathe,
For only my eyes can see
The innocence that is asleep

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

1 posted 2000-08-22 10:53 AM

Very beautiful and a lovely thought :
For only my eyes can see
The innocence that is asleep
Deepak

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-08-22 04:38 PM

So intense yet delicate...I have to agree with demoninlove...this was a very beautiful and lovely poem.

Angel

I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

3 posted 2000-08-22 11:29 PM

i also agree with dose above me...very very beautiful n i really love the title...just plain great.

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-08-23 04:15 AM

Very smooth and gentle...James

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-08-23 06:21 AM

lost hamlet... a TREMENDOUS poem!

A good subject ... you encaptured it well.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

6 posted 2000-08-24 02:39 AM

Very nice poem. Reminded me of:
"Lying close to you
Feeling your heart beating
Whatch you smile while you are sleeping
When you're far away and dreaming
I could spend my life
In this sweet surrendor
I could stay lost in this moment
Forever...
Coz every moment spent with you
Is a moment I treasure"

Don't wanna miss a thing/ Aerosmith

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