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Desperation |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
How long must I live in desperation? How long must this pain remain? How long must my heart desire so much with nothing here to gain? How long will these memories of suffering last? How long will I search in darkness? How long will I rely on myself for deliverance and nothing more or less? For now, I'll say my silent prayer. For now, I'll just bow my head. For now, I'll think of you, and remember all you have said. For now my silence is crucial, For now my patience is a virtue. For now, I turn in hopes of understanding, and seek joy in my thoughts of you. I turn to your strength, I turn to your love. I turn to hear your voice. I turn and turn in circles, it seems, and you are never there. Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Great poem. I can relate to that too. If you ever want someone to talk to...email me. Dark Star |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How long, I wish I knew. I turn and turn in circles myself, and it hurts, and its not fair. But we have to go one, and keep looking for that little patch of light at the end of the tunnel somewhere. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
ya know what? you bloody rule! this poem is so very kewl...ive been there i have n i know how all of it feels...no fun at all...you can email me too...great work! All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"How long must my heart desire so much with nothing here to gain." Enjoyed this poem...Reminds me of songs "Never There" by Cake, and "She Not There" by the Zombies...James |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
Lil One- I find it very emotional and true. "How long must this pain remain with nothing here to gain?" Is a question that I ask myself time and time again. But I know there is not changing the pain but I can always look for the gain. Remember stay strong and keep writting those poems and you'll find your gains. Great poem thanks for sharing POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Sad. Your last verse was good... keep well  |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
A big "Thanks" to all of you!! Ypu all just don't know how much I appreciate your replies!! ((HUGS)) to each of you! Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beautiful but sad... You've captured one sided love so well. It hurts, I know and you just can't do a thing about it coz you just can't put him out of your mind, and when you try there's such emtiness inside... Hope you'll feel better! |
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