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Dark and Lonely nights |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi yall. well this is a kinda sad poem. but it ended with a happy note. there is a girl that i love. and she showed me that she is my love. not wanda. and i made her mad. so i wrote this to ask for her forgiveness. i just seen her and she cried and said that she was sorry. so me and her are better then ever. i just wish that we could be together. and someday i know we will. =) tell me what you think of it. Dark and lonely nights All night long i sit alone in the darkness and cry thinking of today when you said goodbye wishing that you were in my arms wishing i was off this lonley farm i wish i was standing under the rocky mountian skys but that still cant match the beauty that i see in your eyes you made me see what i never seen before you opened my eyes, my heart and more you showed me the way, you said i was your man after you told me that i could barly even stand you made me feel loved again, you gave me back my soul you helped me open up again, telling you secrets i never told i know that i have hurt you, i know that i caused you pian i know that i messed things up, things will never be the same but please find it in your heart, to give me another chance let me back in your heart, let me fill it with romance you are my big ol' angel hun, and i am your little teddy bear and no matter what happens i will always be there so please hunny i am begging you, down on my hands and knees here is my heart and soul, do with it as you please if you chose to to leave me and to say goodbye i will smile and say i love you, so that you wont see me cry but if you forgive me, it will be something you wont regret you have made a mark on my heart that i will never forget i hope you say yes but if its no i will understand too just remember that you will always be in my heart and i will always and forever love you... Jesse C. Jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great way of asking forgiveness. You display founation of emotions here. Great job.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Jesse, this is a wonderful piece... I forgave you at "...cant match the beauty that i see in your eyes..."  Good job! Take care now!  |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Jesse... if ANYBODY ever wrote this for me, I'd probably melt in my chair, and hold that person in my arms for eternity, and never let go... I'd realize what I was missing. Great piece... very touching! Keep it up!!  Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You really have a way of expressing your feelings..enjoyed reading this...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Jesse, first of all, gorgeous poem, and second, I TOLD you there was something good right around the corner. SO happy to hear things are better. And I know that this girl will cherish you as you should be. Peace Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse what a beautiful piece, I'm glad you have more in your life now, and I hope she realises just who and what you are, then she'd never let you go.. *hugs* Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks yall. *hugs* this one was purely for forgivness. i just hope this all works out with me and her. see whe is very far away. but if fate has us together then nothing can stop us. i do still love wanda, and hope we will be together but i have learned others love me too. i just hope it all works out. thanks yall LM: thanks for forgiving me *hugs* Lil OnE: your are soooo sweet. you made me blush whenn you said that. *kisS* thanks. e-mail me sometime =) Sandra: she was never around the corner. she was always there. i just didnt see how much she loved me. =) hope you got my e-mail hun =) Sis: *big hugs and kisses* i hope she does too. i love her alot. and i have the same feeling with her as i do with wanda. and you know that takes alot. i just hope i can be in her arms. *hugs* i miss you on icq sis. hope to see you on there soon. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi Jesse, Love it. Glad to see things are going better. That is what I like to see a Smile in your Heart. *hugs* -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Jesse, terrific poem! Really hopped along quite nicely... and the words and meaning was fabulous! |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks yall. i just hope this all works out for me. i do love her with all my heart. keep the comments coming =)~ Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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