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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-08-21 04:27 PM


A blanket of blackness
   Has covered
  All that i am
No longer a man
  Alone i stand

Alone in this world
And no one cares
Their all unable to
Share, so i must
     Stare
At this earth alone
  Having no home
No throne all alone

A blanket of blackness
    Has covered
   All that i am.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
1 posted 2000-08-21 07:42 PM


Thanks for sharing your blanket
I was getting cold

monique

bluebrdy65
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-08-21 09:21 PM


Oh I have been here and done that
alone it seems I must always be
hang in there baby it gets better
I dont know about you but for me
its like a rubber ball bouncing back and forth. great job
on this poem I really enjoyed it
Blue

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
3 posted 2000-08-22 02:03 AM


Great. Superb. So cold.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-22 04:29 PM


Hey! We care and ARE able to share!  
Nice poem, keep sharing with us and don't feel lonely, we're here for you!

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-08-22 06:30 PM


jeremiah~~~buddy where have you been i havent seen you in the longest..good poem..i was missing your work in the teen forum..well hit me up if you want i have a new e-mail address..
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-08-23 01:16 AM


the blanket of darkness that so often comes upon us, covers us all so slide over..seriously though loved your poem
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

7 posted 2000-08-23 06:29 AM


Jeremiah.... sooooo sad!!!  But expressed well    Take care.
~ Tara ~

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