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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Just a little lighter diversion for a change.. Today I heard him speak on a tape, and not to me yet still the timber of his voice induced a fantasy. While in my car, on route to work he suddenly appeared sitting right there next to me he winked and slightly leered. His arms reached out and pulled me close his lips devoured mine I fell hard under passions spell his kiss, stronger than wine. Abruptly I arrived at work still dreaming of his touch I walked inside delirious and just a little flushed... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Cat- Wow! Love this one! What a great fantasy! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great Job Cat I love this one I like to dream what a wonderful job BLUe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh Kitty,...this one made me smile. Secret little tale you told. How sweet. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, If I only had your power to daydream I would die a happy woman.  Be well Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh! I know what it's like!!!! Hehe... "Abruptly I arrived at work still dreaming of his touch I walked inside delirious and just a little flushed..."  Wonderful and cute... I like to daydream all the time!!! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
While in my car, on route to work he suddenly appeared sitting right there next to me he winked and slightly leered. LOL!!! Car?!! Hmmm... happens not only in the car!  Excellent poem Cat!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey Cat when all the kissin begins I have to pull my car over and part someplace...or next thing you know I'll be kissin a telephone pole or a fire hydrant or something...hey..if you can kiss and drive more power to you...who said cell phones are a distraction..James |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Like this one! If it weren't for daydreams I don"t think I could make it through work : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Cat, You said it (delirious) day dreams can be oh so good for the soul, awesome write here, so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
this made me smile, now those kind of fantasies, we can all use~~ *S* enjoyed, bj ~the breath, a mystery of it's own ~~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Damn I really should stop my astral projections, hahaha. Loved it kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
Cat well written and expressive. I like how this flows and expresses your yearnings. forrest |
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