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It Seems I Am Back |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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IT SEEMS I AM BACK Well I’m back, what did you say? I said I am back, to what? Come on, you know that special place, that place that will never completely let me go only I can feel, see and understand. This place I speak of contains such beauty as a diamond cut to perfection a rose to melt the heart, a child over flowing in happiness, you could say it’s a place of total harmony. Oh, but don’t be fooled this place has other things dwelling in it as well. What do you mean? I mean it has so much more than I would like to be there. Pain beyond compare, sorrow to be matched by nothing and fear that can shake you to the core, and don’t let me forget the lack of understanding of how to be happy. The feeling of anger and loneliness. This place is confusing, slipping in out at will. I thinking I’m in charge to just loose it again, gaining control eludes me. What is this place you speak of? It’s hell, my minds eye. By, Cerenity This is an oldie made new when I read !!!'s poem. "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
oh boy, now isn't that the truth? the Mind's eye, mine sees and talks to me all the time! Creating felicity and hell, what a combo ~grin~ enjoyed muchly, bj ~the breath, a mystery of it's own ~~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The minds eye, yes. it is a treacherous place, and confusing. love the poem kid. love the idea. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Boji Stone and Joel, Thank you very much for your wonderful replys to this poem the minds eye can be a friend or fow which ever one it is, it has mastery over us, and most of the time in both directions it does not help because its deseptive looking out for its own clear passeged. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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