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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Pass the word that i'm back PLZ. i don't have my computer set up yet but i'll be coming up to the library alot to post so here are a few and if i don't work tomorrow i'll post some more. and i came back to Fl cause me and my family did not like it in SC we'll at least where we moved to. but i'll tell you all more about it later. Theres a crack in my tub Of love That leaks and seeps Into the caseing That squeaks When it's steped on and hurt by you. So Now all the love I had for you Has leaked on Through On to Someone New. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
What an inventive way to convey this feeling! I loved it. Great job, Jeremiah. BTW... where in Fl? I'm in Pasco County  Great work... keep it up  Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Can relate a lot. Only so recently as those feelings provoked in me. Nicely done. Lies comfort but the truth burns. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hey kid good to read from you again, and great to see your style has contuned "Great" I'll be around more also. loved the poem kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
My friend when I read the title of your poem I do not have say more. I know before hand that your poems will be great. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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