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Dark Poetry #2

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silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-08-20 04:54 AM

*closet-girl*

little match-girl,
she whispered.
little small child-girl.
the touch of her bare feet on the smooth street
smiling her third of a smile.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-08-20 11:55 AM

A sad image in this poem makes it more poignant.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-08-21 04:13 AM

Silentsky,

A haunting poem. So short, and yet so laden with thought. Like your name.

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

3 posted 2000-08-21 05:18 AM

Dear silentsky, I hope the match doesnt break. Maybe one day we will see the other two thirds. Intriguing portrait of a slight person.
ilph.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-08-21 06:26 AM

Silentsky,
Haunting picture of an almost child.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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