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Dark Poetry #2

depths of absence

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-08-20 02:20 AM

there's a hole in my gut
the size of the pacific
with waves that roll over me like dough

that eternal longing for the non-existent

ive been known on occasion
to take the plunge
but never have i reached
the bottom.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-20 02:57 AM

great work, short but thought provoking.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-08-21 04:22 AM

Wow, silentsky, brilliant piece. The abyss can be magnetic, can it not?< !signature-->

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

[This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-21-2000).]

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-21 04:26 AM

Ahhh.... i liked it A LOT!
Sounds like a famous quote

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