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boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

0 posted 2000-08-19 03:27 PM

his eyes are wild
     created by arduous emotion,
     He fidgets in the chair
     waiting for a voice to tell
     him what to say.
     If he reveals the secret,
     Will they understand?
     Perspiration of fear
     trembles is hands.
     In the silence, he prays
     for mercy, for death,

     a deliverance from the Craving

     Sweet Sarah, Sue, Beth’s,
     each have names,
     one after one, two
     after three, ripe is the count
     binding photos in albums,
     staining images on the wall.
     Circling, he draws
     with instruments shiny,
     pure as silver in a counterfeit,
     in the black heart of mutant seeds
     the blood drips innocence
     sharp from the Edge

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-19 10:55 PM

Well, I am going to go ahead and be honest and say I did not quite get the meaning in this poem. Maybe you could enlighten me. I did think it was intense, and beautifully written. And I like it, I just don't understand it. I am just dense tonight

catalinamoon

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Janie
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 158

2 posted 2000-08-20 01:31 AM

I think this is about a serial killer who is addicted to the thrill of the kill. "The voice" he waits for to tell him what to say is the same voice that tells him to kill.

Scary...

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-20 08:47 AM

There you go...

boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

4 posted 2000-08-20 09:50 AM

thank you LM, where was it?
dang I am getting foggy, LOL.

Catalinamoon, yes Janie
was right. It is about
a serial killer, who is
addicted to the thrill
of killing, yet he hates
that he is.....I was wondering
about bad "mutant" seeds,
are they born, or are they
created? I wish I knew,
or greater minds than mine did,
so hopefully, somehow the mutation could
be elimnated, reversed
cured. thank you all very much~!

bj

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

5 posted 2000-08-20 11:39 AM

Very well wirtten...an interesting topic too..

Dark Star

boji stone
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 62
USA

6 posted 2000-08-20 01:05 PM

thank you dark star,
I appreciate the response!

*S*

Z

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2000-08-25 09:37 PM

when it comes to writing 'dark' - I think you gave the word its meaning - great write BJ!

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