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Dark Poetry #2

Hardest day of my life

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-08-25 07:46 AM

Graduation

Day of doom sadly arrived
Escaping it for years I tried.

Imagining the painful end
Rain of tears have drowned my bed.

Line of finish carries threat
No way back, we'll pay the debt.

Million things I have to part
Like little pieces of my heart.

All dressed up beside my friend
Music playing , words are said.

Heart still whole will overflow
I notice you in second row.

Eyes lost control, soul torn apart
Life without you soon to start.

Big bouquet my fingers clutch
All shades of red you like so much.

Mission now is crystall clear
Say good-bye and hide the tears.

Time runs out, go up the stairs
People greeting, shaking hands.

Though sad and painful, I'm aware
Farewell to you - without compare.

Loosing ability to speak
As you get up and kiss my cheek.

After that it's all a blur
Can't remember anymore...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-08-25 07:55 AM

LM What were you graduating from and who did you leave behind? Sad poem, heartfelt. Good write.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-25 08:07 AM

I knew there's some explanation needed...
Well I was graduating from school last year and leaving behind the man who has such an influence on my life... my teacher...
But it didn't turn out as fatal as I thought back then

[This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-25-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-08-25 08:09 AM

Thanks. That explains it.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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