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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Do you remember the first time we met? I do Do you remember the things we've talked about? I do Do you remember what I look like or my real name? I do Do you remember the last time we talked? I do Do you ever call on me just to say hi? I do Friendships can be funny that way. Some people take them more seriously then others, But every friend should be taken as your best. See one day we realize all those friends are gone Then we have no one to turn to to talk to. We take for granted that those friends will be there Cause one day you'll need that friend , You know, the one you haven't talked to in a while, And then they might not have time for you. So, have you talked to a friend today? Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello. I don't believe I've read any of your work before. This is nice, comforting to be reminded that friendship is a two way street - sometimes though the need outstrips the will. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
this poem is really true...some ppl just have friends at times they think they can "use" them... < !signature-->keep it up! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hi, I liked this poem very much, it made me think... Thank you for reminding me I have to make a call to my friend in the army... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hey LOTR, this is so true!  Friends mean so much... and not until they are no longer there do you realise quite "how" much they .... nice words |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good writing, and a good reminder to us all to treasure our friends and loved ones as we should. Catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Thanks for all the support people. I have a thing about friendship and its importance, guess I lost too many friends without saying goodbye, Thanks again Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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