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Just a little girl
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Just a little girl |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i had this very good friend named Tiffany...her mother was both physically and verbally abusive...i haven't been able to talk to her in a little over 2 years now...so this is for Tiffany... ~Just a little Girl: For Tiffany~ look at her so thin and pale crying there so small and frail sitting in the corner darkness calling for her looking in the mirror darkness drawing nearer she'll use the blade to end her pain it's over now, she can't be saved she'll take her heartache to the grave for all the pain she held inside from darkness pain can never hide and now little girl i right this rhyme your just another face lost in time. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Very good poem |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanks bluebyrd  i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
how sad! Hugs for you and Tiffany. It sounds like that was what she needed. Joy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik, Kethry comes up and gives you a big HUG for you and Tiffany both . Maybe she'll see this and be touched. Maybe even contact you. Whattayano reunions through the net *laughs* Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Every one of your poems seems to send shivers down my spine, your words are so sharp and to the point... Another job well done! Hope Tiffany is alright... |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Nik, What a way you have.. to make us feel and think!! A true poet! Thank you for another touch from someone elses life.. Click |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Good poem Nikol...I can kinda relate to it...hope your friend is ok... Dark Star |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
joy, thanx for the reply..i wish i could hug her right now  kethry, i would be so relieved if that happend...thanx for the reply LM, well is that a good thing or a bad thing? i hope its good... Click, thank you veyr much for that wonderful comment..."a true poet" nice ring to it made my dayDanni, i'm glad you liekd it buddy... and Tiff, if your out there and you can see it...please contact me...i need to know you are ok Nik< !signature--> i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Great work! I like the last line. It really helps to amplify the scope of the problem of child abuse in our society. It's very unfortunate that this has to happen. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Good of course! i wouldn't have responded with something evil... I like poems that make me feel something, yours sure do! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nik, very sweet and a sad story told, unfortunately so common. It is good of you to care so much for a friend from the past, in spite of your own pain. Take care. This poem had a very strong feel to it, catalinamoon |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Once again you bring us something sad yet beautifully written. I wish you luck in meeting this friend again, shes lucky to have you . Richi Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
what is left to say for the rest have said it all. Great poem Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
At first you could have been talking about me...I was like that sad little girl for so many years. I never believed that ending it was the way though...I always believed that when I grew up I could change it...I love your work...Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nik...this is great work honey...you just keep growing in your writing |
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