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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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0 posted 2000-08-20 10:51 PM


What there is without
Kills what there is within
And we who strive
And we who cry
And we who taste the tears of bitter pain
We cannot escape this death
We can but hold it at bay
And drink the wine of happiness
While we wait for our resolve to fade
Will I recognize it when it comes for me?
Will I mistake it for a thief in the night?
Will I see that I am given the one thing that I have never known?
Shall I trade the only possession I have?
I shall welcome that which comes to enfold me in her arms



Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

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1 posted 2000-08-21 12:55 PM


Good job with your free write. Keep it up.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

T.Rose
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2 posted 2000-08-21 01:24 AM


This is real touching I like this


SpitFire
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3 posted 2000-08-21 09:36 AM


~Ian,...you have done a magnificent job with this freeverse thing. Your words are powerful and come to me. This flows and has strength in it's questioning. Interesting. Thank you for sharing O' kind one. Take care I. *Peace.
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