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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Looking beyond the typical fantasy, I see myself painted in so many colors, Stretched across the wall Within my eyes I hold your hand, encouraging and demanding that you leave your mark upon my deepening soul My flesh listening for your words, Laughing and spinning the colors pick away at those simple things left alone That would have been well but no, this game grows tiring Gluing CD's to my skin, trying to make it all mine and only mine, so selfishly I crave your praise of authenticity and I want you to love to hate me, So when I'm human You'll take it upon yourself to judge and punish me - Feeling free to try and cover all my scars with falsehoods and shiny glitter Feeling free to claim to have saved me, but I think you're just as lost as the girl that lives inside of me So I welcome you to come and find yourself in the wings of my spirit Then when your shadow doesn't dominate over you, I'll build it again so that you can begin Revealing yourself confidently through the voices of my room and your own < !signature--> I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
WOW. I am honestly at a loss for words. I know the feeling, though. Trying to identify our lost inner beings. AWESOME. So very well captured, dark. I loved it. It reminds me of a song... Hide little girl, hide little girl beneath your mama's skirt. Hide little girl, hide little girl, and maybe it won't hurt. Hide from the laughter, what if it's at you. Hide from the sorrow, so no one has a clue. Hide little girl hide little girl, beneath the smile you've learned. Hide behind the mascarade of credits that you've earned. Hide in crowded corridors until the school day ends, hide in courts of favor, but never trust a friend. Hide little girl, hide little girl, behind your wedding veil. Eyes that cannot cry are eyes that tattle tale. Hide little girl, hide little girl, until your time runs out. You can't always hide, one day you'll be found out. Wonderful work, Dark! ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I really liked your poem... Dark Star |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
this was pensive, and i could feel the emotions, good all over you~!! *S* bjstone |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
How very cool! I loved this one.... neat concept, great word choice! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow! I felt this down to my toes. Great work. I feel it as you speaking to a man, am I wrong? cat... Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all very, very much and yes cat I was speaking this to a man. He knows who he is...that is if he gets around to reading it. Thanks again! Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Angel, but I think you're just as lost as the girl that lives inside of me your poetry touched a chord that left me quivering. Excellent poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
"Gluing CD's to my skin, trying to make it all mine and only mine, so selfishly" Such wonderful imagery here and through out...this is wonderfully written and so very well expressed...Love it! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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