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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-08-17 05:41 AM

You slipped away quietly
I did not see you go
only rasping breath that ceased
and your skin as pale as snow,
informed that you had gone,
on your face an argent glow.
Urgently I cried your name
for I still need you so
but slipped away you neatly did
and left me filled with woe.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-17 07:31 AM

Kethry, this is filled with sadness. Very nice poem. Take care.
Cat...

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

sash
Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 125

2 posted 2000-08-17 09:09 AM

The loss of a loved one is very tough to deal with. Sad indeed. Nice work.
Take care.

~Sash~

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

3 posted 2000-08-17 08:01 PM

Beautiful piece of poetry here
Sad but graet work
Blue

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

4 posted 2000-08-17 08:11 PM

Ouch! Loseing a loved one is always hard! Be well!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-08-18 07:58 AM

Thank you all for your kind words. It helps to know you are there.

Be well
Keth.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2000-08-18 08:37 AM

Ohhhh Kethry.... yeah, hear what you're saying... take care

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

7 posted 2000-08-18 09:26 AM

So sad...

Easy to relate.
Good luck to you.

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

8 posted 2000-08-18 10:02 AM

Sad, yet so beautifully written.
Wonderful job!
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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