Dark Poetry #2 |
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Gone:( |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
You slipped away quietly I did not see you go only rasping breath that ceased and your skin as pale as snow, informed that you had gone, on your face an argent glow. Urgently I cried your name for I still need you so but slipped away you neatly did and left me filled with woe. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kethry, this is filled with sadness. Very nice poem. Take care. Cat... Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
The loss of a loved one is very tough to deal with. Sad indeed. Nice work. Take care. ~Sash~ |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Beautiful piece of poetry here Sad but graet work Blue |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ouch! Loseing a loved one is always hard! Be well! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thank you all for your kind words. It helps to know you are there. Be well Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhhh Kethry.... yeah, hear what you're saying... take care ![]() |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
So sad... ![]() Easy to relate. Good luck to you. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Sad, yet so beautifully written. Wonderful job! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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