For thy beloved's gone.... (A Quatrain)

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For thy beloved's gone.... (A Quatrain)

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

0 posted 2000-08-17 03:15 PM

Still thou thy cries, for thy beloved's gone!
Cease now thy wanderings for thy shoes are torn!
O puny Mortal! Dost really believe that Thou
Can change the destiny for which all men are born?

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

1 posted 2000-08-17 03:22 PM

This was excellent!! It is currently resounding upon the walls of my heart, it echoes in my head. I really liked this piece!Great job, demoninlove! ((HUGS))

Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken.
~Lil OnE~

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-08-17 04:20 PM

Oh yes.

F a n t a s t i c !

How tiny our sorrow when compared to the magnitude of the universe, and yet it seems the universe to us.

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-17 04:25 PM

I REALLY dig this Sheakspere style!
Very cool!

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

4 posted 2000-08-17 10:12 PM

A smile of thanks - for you all Lil One, Lotharingia and the cryptic acronym LM with the lovely heart. While there is no denying destiny, in other moods I don't subscribe to my views in this quatrain.. I'm positing one diagramatically opposite in meaning right now.
Deepak

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

5 posted 2000-08-18 12:31 PM

Again a fitting tribute to Khayya'm.
"The moving finger writes..."

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-08-18 07:07 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Fate accompli.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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