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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i've enjoyed my life i've been loving thru the strife i've lived here and died have i lived through i have tried, tired within a shell we spelled can we be dischevelled can we not try can't we finally see can't we cry can it be lately can't we just deliver some sense can we not deliver consequence is it lingering in our taste have we seen a flower bloom pure have we ever given thanks to the thing we haven't ever seen have we lost have we forgotten something when it is found, we pass it on can we live with the chance that life has given us will we chance the love that was i think that i'm done i wonder if my chance came to be i live just to J.L. Koehler |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
This hits me hard today carolina but it is good work amazing how I come here check out a few poems and relate to how Im feeling great job Bluebrdy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very thought provoking poem you've written here!  |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
Words again that touch my heart, knowing where they come from and caring. Beautifully written. Denise |
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