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Forgive Me If I Kill You
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Forgive Me If I Kill You |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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FORGIVE ME IF I KILL YOU Forgive me if I kill you, But it’s my job today. I’m usually reading documents, Deep within the CIA. But we’ve run short of agents, Cutback in funds you see. So few were left we all drew straws, And your job came to me. It’s really nothing personal, I don’t even know your name. I just do what they assign me, I don’t seek James Bond fame. I’m really not a bad man, Tho I’ve no children or a wife. The company felt it better, If I not complicate my life. I live a lonely existence, Agents have few friends. It’s best to keep it simple, Never leave loose ends. So I guess I’ll have to kill you, But they don’t tell me why. Understand it’s nothing personal, It’s just your turn to die. And soon it will be my turn, It could come today. But that’s the way life is, When you work for CIA. Marv Hardin 6/21/00 |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow. wow. all i can say is wow. let me say it backwards.. wow. hardrock, i hope, how dearly i hope, it isn't you leading this existence. for if it is, i am a felon, you need not worry about me. your secrets i will keep!! email me!!!!!!!!  i am serious. this poem here really hit me HARD!!! i needed to know people of allllll lives, jobs, places in the world feel what i feel sometimes. thank you, hardrock. kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW, Man, dark intrigue and poetry.... What a unique concept to me. I like it...good read! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Thank you both for your kind words.....as you can see, I tend to be prolific when I get started. I would love to e-mail lots of you...just to discuss some of the thought processes behind your writings, but I don't know how. Anyone can e-mail me at [email protected] I answer all e-mails and I try to be absolutely honest and forthright. While I don't usually tout another site, I have some stuff published on Pete Collins website at www.zoomnet.net/~petecol/main.html There you will find two volumes of my poetry. Enjoy (I hope) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~OoooOoEeeee.....THAT was a darn good read. Very interesting to hear those words. Thank you. *Peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Man this is good writing...really gets the message across. Are you really a member of the CIA...I know..if you tell me you will have to kill me...ha..ha...James |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
CIA? Me? Nah...I'm worse. I'm an insurance adjuster. I really do thank all of you who have responded....and I promise to try to be better about responding to your poems. There is so much talent here....sometimes I just get caught up in the reading and don't take time to respond. Great talent.....I look forward to reading more PS...Duh, and double Duh! I figured out how to e-mail Sorry Kynder for my density. |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
A person wonders just how much of that cloak and dagger really goes on. Wonderful poem!! I enjoyed immensley!!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
oh it all goes on my friend. hardrock, great poem my friend. great. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
this is really good read, i really like it |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i see here before me another great poet. and long to read more. keep it up good read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh yes - very real to life. EXCELLENT poem! |
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