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Unperfect fairy-tale
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Unperfect fairy-tale |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
It was many years ago,I realised I love you so. One day It hit me in the head , for this I wasn't yet prepared. My friends , they did not understand, they laughed and taunted me instead . A little girl , fifteen of age back then I thought It's just a stage , But years flew by - one ,two ,three ... five ! You'd think what used to be has died... My love became much more intence, with thoughts of you my mind's obsessed. Still think of you, my endless love Believe that you're my other half. The fairy-tale not yet complete I hope for ending more than sweet. Unfortunately, in this feature, I'm just your student you're - my teacher  [This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ok, so this was supposed to be a shape of the heart...but... After many many many efforts... just pretend it looks like one! |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
That poem was great, I especially like the design you set it up in. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Paula  I'm glad you could figure out what it was  It was a very difficult task... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LM I knew straight away it was a heart.  I liked the hook at the end of your poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
LM your efforts have paid off. I loved the heart design!! However, I liked the poem just as much. Another wonderful poem from you... just as I had suspected. ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Kethry, Lil, thank you so much!  and Hugs! Me - |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
That was a cute poem! The shape worked well! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Wren and all you guys... This is a very personal poem, I hope YOU don't find it as weird as my friends did... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi LM, Weird no, love is love no matter how you slice it, and if its ment to be then its not bad, wonderful peom, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... LM.... great poem! I have a friend whose thoughts echo your poem .... take care.~ Tara ~ |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
LM!!!! This is wonderful! and understood completely! Keep sharing! Denise |
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