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Chained2illusions
Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*
0 posted 2000-08-19 10:08 AM

Silenced
Whistles have melted away,
Thistles in my fingers,

Long strings
connecting
entwined between the souls,

Plush,
delicious delusions

Touch me,
feel the whispers of thousands past.
Listen to the cries of souls alive
in my lips.

Everyone is staring,
dancing shoes stapled to my feet.

See me,
lifetimes spinning endlessly.
Prison walls
paper made of steel.

Breathe me,
women of life,
earth,
winds of caverns blowing silently

Thistles in my fingers,
the whistles all have melted away.
© Copyright 2000 Denise Astorino - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
1 posted 2000-08-19 12:51 PM

~Hey there,...I REALLY like the way you write. Your style. This is an excellent piece. I'll read it again. Take care C2I. *Peace.
Chained2illusions
Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*
2 posted 2000-08-19 01:07 PM

Hey Fire,

thanks much!!!

Denise
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