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lost hamlet
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since 2000-08-15
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0 posted 2000-08-16 11:42 AM





Fixed end evening’s wine red eve
In absence of stars brilliance I see
Ghosts that haunt deep inside of me

They strive around my heart in and out of love
While their breath cold as ice runs through out
My blood, the ghosts that haunt deep inside of me
With eyes of the jades most surreal green  
Will not let my good conscience awake from sleep
But cast upon my thoughts demons
Whose screams shriek at the sight of dreams
That pour out of my mind and slide upon the
Sun spots spine and land ever gently in the darkness
That surrounds me while sat in corner by the grim hand of myself,

Now they come, falling from the relaxed sky above where I stay,
The drops harsh and piercing with a frost bite that burrows into the
Deepest of me,

Trying to run, I stumble back into the darkness that
I am so aware of, it has befriended me and we
Sit down together and talk about how
The obscurity is a fractured mirror crack re-image
Of the blame that stains my face


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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
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1 posted 2000-08-16 11:54 AM


Wow...Hamlet (do yo mind if I call you that?)

I loved your work! It was brilliant!   Very good form too! Keep it up!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

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