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Chained2illusions
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

0 posted 2000-08-15 10:45 PM


The moon,
She is swollen,
hungry,
violated.

Dripping from the seams
of deepest crimson.

Has someone stabbed her through the heart?
Has someone torn open her swollen womb,
and stolen the life within?

She is crying,
the moon weeps tears of blood,
bathing the world with a crimson sea.

She has been invaded,
opened wide from the inside out,
shown to the world,

violated.

Do you see her fat protuding belly?
She is melting into the earth,
brimming over with the thickest wine.

The heavens,
merely mocking this goddess
as she opens herself,
yielding,
crying,
bleeding.


There is fire inside us all..it sparks with just the match.

© Copyright 2000 Denise Astorino - All Rights Reserved
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Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)
1 posted 2000-08-15 11:27 PM


This is well written. itsvery descriptive, and imaginative. You can almost feel the moon's pain. Well done!

-"!!!"

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