Dark Poetry #2 |
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Who Cares? |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas ![]() |
Who cares that this heart beats Through unremitting Time, and knows No peace...who cares That hidden embers burn unquenched, Where only leaden ashes seem to lie, And flare in secret conflagration Until the soul itself is reddened By their glow... Or that imprisoned tears Have welled to boundless seas, Unfathomable as the pride That dams their turbid flow. Who cares that unclosed eyes Be shut to all save dreams That knew no unredemption once, Of promise or of praise, Or that bitterness be folded close In draping mists to hide A bleeding wound. Who cares that dawns and dusks, And stars and moons, And ebbs and tides and years, Are merely hopes that come and go... While I live on...forever! |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Who cares? I do.. And I sure have had many days of feeling this way. Beautiful as always. Sandra |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Nicely done Rex. Very dark indeed. This is the first dark piece of yours I have had the pleasure of reading (that I can recall anyway...lol). I hope to see more. ![]() ![]() |
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Nikolette Sadness![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i like this one alot...very...oooooh...oh and btw...cowboys are so sexy! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very nice, Rex, very nice! You always seem to amaze me with your words. ![]() DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
As with all you do, this is superb. Be well, my friend. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
We all care Rex!! This was full of emotions and another beautiful poem from you!!!! Perfectly done!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Rex- Masterful work! Lovely! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rex I left your poem till last, because I believed it would be beyond compare. You did not disappoint me my friend. Superb. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
and who cares that i will never be able to create such masterpieces such as this!!!! wow, rex.... i can only echo everyone else!! you truly have a way with words, my friend. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read this excellent poem...James |
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