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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-08-13 12:10 PM


Someday I know, as I breathe in the winds
Sailing off on a boat
With the breeze in my lungs
And the tingle of freshness in my throat
Tears of happiness that roll as
Cold rain down my cheeks
Will be another moment of joy
For me, alone with the water, the sky
The earth, ground, and peeling paint vessel


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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-08-14 12:00 PM


Very soothing read here.  Yet another nice one, Joy.


DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-08-14 05:27 AM


Exhilarating!  
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2000-08-14 09:44 AM


I could picture you on your boat. This was very solitude. Sounds like you are at peace with yourself.

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-08-14 01:02 PM


Mmmm. I am at peace. I found this very soothing to write. Thanks for replying.

Joy


Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old time is still a-flying,
And this same flower that smiles today
To-morrow will be dying.

-Robert Herrick


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-08-15 10:33 PM


Very pretty, Joy. Nice poem.
Catalinamoon

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

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