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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-15 09:40 PM


i'm trying! i swear i am...this is unedited...just starting with a title...

~Trying to live again~

you've been gone for so long now
for you my heart does yearn
please take your final bow
because i know you won't return

after all this time without you
i've tried to forget the pain
i'm trying to live without you
so i can love again

he doesn't look a thing like you
which makes me smile a bit
when i see him i don't think of you
it's a good relationship

he makes me laugh and smile
he looks at me that way
i know he really loves me
he says it everyday

i'm trying to live again
loving without you here
but still a part of me
wishes you were near

i want to be done with this
don't want to feel your touch
why can't i just be dont with it
yet i still love you so much

so he is here
and your long gone
i hold him near
just so long

i'm trying to love again
without you loving me
i'm trying to live again
without you here with me

good bye for now
because i'm living now again
good bye forever
because we were never friends

Nikolette Sadness



i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
Nick_UK
Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10

1 posted 2000-08-16 02:44 AM


I'm still reading...  
Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
2 posted 2000-08-16 05:43 AM


this was just beautiful Nik! I love it...
that's just the only thing I can say...


love, Virgin Suïcide...



"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-08-16 06:07 AM


Lovely words from your heart...don't worry...it takes time to let go and go on...everything will be alright...James
LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-08-16 07:14 AM


Nik... I think I'm gonna cry...
This is too familliar...
Other than that, it's just  

    




[This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-16-2000).]

moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-08-16 07:27 AM


me 2.
darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
6 posted 2000-08-16 05:43 PM


That's really cool Nikol...

Dark Star

Nikolette Sadness
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7 posted 2000-08-16 06:08 PM


thanks guys...i really do want to move on...and i'm trying really hard...but thats just what it is...hard...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

8 posted 2000-08-16 06:32 PM


...and slowly but surely you will do just that...move on....."Nothing is easy that is not hard at first!"
I enjoyed this through and through.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-08-16 07:54 PM


Great stuff here, it's hard to move on but at least your lucky enough to have a new guy to help.  

*Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..*
Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit

Nikolette Sadness
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10 posted 2000-08-16 08:19 PM


actually i dont have a guy...but there is someone i like...its not gonna happen tho...
Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-08-17 05:49 AM


Nik,
This is lovely and it's so easy to see you are trying.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Beenie
Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27
WVa
12 posted 2000-08-17 11:57 AM


Boy have I been there before! Just wishing for the memories to go long enough to let you move on.......Touching poem!


Beenie

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