Dark Poetry #2 |
Trying to live again.. |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i'm trying! i swear i am...this is unedited...just starting with a title... ~Trying to live again~ you've been gone for so long now for you my heart does yearn please take your final bow because i know you won't return after all this time without you i've tried to forget the pain i'm trying to live without you so i can love again he doesn't look a thing like you which makes me smile a bit when i see him i don't think of you it's a good relationship he makes me laugh and smile he looks at me that way i know he really loves me he says it everyday i'm trying to live again loving without you here but still a part of me wishes you were near i want to be done with this don't want to feel your touch why can't i just be dont with it yet i still love you so much so he is here and your long gone i hold him near just so long i'm trying to love again without you loving me i'm trying to live again without you here with me good bye for now because i'm living now again good bye forever because we were never friends Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
I'm still reading... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
this was just beautiful Nik! I love it... that's just the only thing I can say... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely words from your heart...don't worry...it takes time to let go and go on...everything will be alright...James |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Nik... I think I'm gonna cry... This is too familliar... Other than that, it's just [This message has been edited by LM (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
me 2. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's really cool Nikol... Dark Star |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanks guys...i really do want to move on...and i'm trying really hard...but thats just what it is...hard... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and slowly but surely you will do just that...move on....."Nothing is easy that is not hard at first!" I enjoyed this through and through. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great stuff here, it's hard to move on but at least your lucky enough to have a new guy to help. *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
actually i dont have a guy...but there is someone i like...its not gonna happen tho... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik, This is lovely and it's so easy to see you are trying. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Beenie Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27WVa |
Boy have I been there before! Just wishing for the memories to go long enough to let you move on.......Touching poem! Beenie |
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