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Just One Night |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Just for tonight, will you be mine? Leave back the guilt of vows denied? Share my fantasy for this night hold me close, pretend it's right. Thoughts of you make love seem real I'm mesmerized, I only feel. My heart stands like an open door I call to you, I reach for more. Don't slam it shut, it hurts so deep I only need your love to keep. Give me what you have to give I need it all, I want to live. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And live you shall!!!! I feel it in the stars, and when a gypsy says she feels something, she means it!! Great writing here, Sharon, it's a pleasure to read your thoughts!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh..Cat... I feel as if you went through my deepest thoughts and chose to put it in those beautifull words... "I felt all flushed with feever Imbarrased by the crowd I felt he found my letters And read each one out loud..." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh, what a longing exressed here! Cat,...you speak volumes...Volumes Cat,...of just one night and what a pacifier that would be. Super writing. Take care. *Peace. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
the way i took this i could really relate....kinda like you just wish it felt right? hoping that you could love him...even thought you knwo you cant... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
magnificent and so magical,just one night, to share the fantasy. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Cat... FANTASTIC!! What more can I say?  ~ Tara ~ |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
how beautifully stated are your words...this is a terrfic poem can't wait to read more "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, it's amazing what a difference one night can make. Really, really enjoyed the poem. Loved the image of illicit love. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hmmm. What desire! Excellent Cat, as ever! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Beenie Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 27WVa |
It seems as tho you pulled those words from my soul,Cat. You definately know the turmoil inside me. Powerful poem! Beenie |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
It is just beautiful, the desire that comes out... love it! Love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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