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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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All I ever wanted Was a deep drink of eternity A firm grasp on reality And the echo of infinity All i ever needed Was solid ground beneath me Fleeting clouds above me And lanquid days ahead of me All I ever wanted Was to transcend All I ever needed Was your love to lift me ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Me too, Dawn. Why is it too much to ask? Great piece. Cat... Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
thank you catalinamoon...i never thought it was too much to ask either! *LOL* ~Dawn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Yeah, but why is it too much to ask. loved the poem. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I think you just have to find the right person to ask, and yes I think some times it is a very hard thing to ask for. Beautifully written Dawn. All i ever needed Was solid ground beneath me Fleeting clouds above me And lanquid days ahead of me "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Couldn't agree more, and couldn't love this piece more. Great work, Dawn! ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Kethry: thank you very much! brian: thank you! but i do wonder how many people will i have to ask, before i find the answer...because "all i ever wanted was to transcend'.  LiL OnE: *smile*...thank you for the hug and the compliment! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I can't really get the right words together here. Lets just say I am so impressed that you put that into words, so perfectly. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
What a pretty poem- really perfect words! Good one! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Lotharingia: oh thank you so much!a very lovely comment to start my day with! Wren:thank you, it is a big boost to see that you thought it was pretty! thanks again! ~Dawn< !signature--> whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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