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Fall Apart |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The doctors tell me I have one week to live I fall apart It's like I'm dead right now Or my landlord throws me out of my apartment I fall apart Kick myself for not having a good job Or My closest friend stops contact with me I fall apart Wonder what I did to make her hate me and then start hating her for doing this to me Or A mistake I made 10 years ago comes back to haunt me I fall apart Let it live in my heart and eat out my soul I make the desicions I make the choice to be DOWN and stay down I make the choice to get up I make the choice to keep getting back up |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Nice poem! Shows strength. Good! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Damn gurl. Your words,...so powerful. So definate sounding. Great work here. Take care. *Peace. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
good poem I can relate to this good work keep it up Blue |
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