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Good-Bye?
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Good-Bye? |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Is it really good-bye? You promissed to love me 'till the day you die Was it really a lie? You said you can't take it no more Said I put you down to the floor That I never loved you before But you swore... Oh baby, you said, it's OK I'll be here for you every day I know that you'll love me someday At first I kept saying - no way! But then... I loved it, you being my fan Applauding as hard as you can Believe me, I'm only human... To hurt you I didn't intend I called you my very best friend But my heart I couldn't command Yet, this dance I never wanted to end Said you wanted to make me your wife I could have hurt you less with a knife Now you are out of my life Guess you have had the last laugh Tears ain't comming, but I wanna cry In the end, the mistakes are all mine Your love for me was divine Can I still be the sun of your sky? This is dedicated to my best friend, who decided he had enough... The sad thing is that I realise now I need him badly, to stay...  |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
*is crying* i like this very much and it touched me deep inside...thank you for sharing Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very emotional impact..I hope for the best for you...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, such a sad situation. Good luck, I hope he comes back. Lovely, emotional poem catalinamoon But words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord B |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks for the support guys, I`m glad you like it. Maybe the bottom line is that it's all for the best, for him and me. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely poem. Sad that he's no longer around you deserve the best. I've learned one thing in life that is relationships are always hard work whether you're in one or not.  Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks Kethry, your replies always warm up my heart |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awwwwww...that's really sad...I really liked it...I hope your best friend stays... Dark Star |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awwwwww...that's really sad...I really liked it...I hope your best friend stays... Dark Star |
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